Changes to S_01: Very minor edits..

zerothi · Jun 14, 2024 · 37a2b61 · 37a2b61
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diff --git a/S_01/run.ipynb b/S_01/run.ipynb
@@ -36,20 +36,20 @@
     "       siesta RUN.fdf > RUN.out\n",
     "\n",
     "  - Go through the output of Siesta to get used to it, also to assert that it ran without errors (always do this!) ((always, **always** do THIS!))\n",
-    "  - Ensure the SCF has indeed converged, Siesta will, by default, die if it hasn't converged the SCF.\n",
+    "  - Ensure that the self-consistent field (SCF) has indeed converged, Siesta will, by default, die if it hasn't converged the SCF.\n",
     "  \n",
-    "2. Use `sisl` to read in the electronic structure (the Hamiltonian), there are several ways of doing this, for now you should try these two methods:\n",
+    "2. Use `sisl` to read-in the electronic structure (the Hamiltonian). There are several ways of doing this, for now you should try these two methods:\n",
     "\n",
     "         H_fdf = sisl.Hamiltonian.read('RUN.fdf')\n",
     "         H_TSHS = sisl.Hamiltonian.read('siesta.TSHS')\n",
     "         \n",
-    "    print the objects and note the difference between the two objects.\n",
+    "    Print the objects and note the difference between the two objects.\n",
     "    What do you think these differences mean? (it isn't relevant for this tutorial, but it will be in later tutorials).\n",
     "    \n",
-    "3. Calculate the $\\Gamma$-point eigen-spectrum using both above Hamiltonians (search the sisl documentation for `eigh`), are they different? If so, why, if not, why not?\n",
+    "3. Calculate the $\\Gamma$-point eigen-spectrum using both above Hamiltonians (search the `sisl` documentation for `eigh`). Are they different? If so, why, if not, why not?\n",
     "\n",
     "4. Calculate the band-structure using the DFT electronic structure using `sisl`. Also calculate the band-structure using the tight-binding Hamiltonian ([TB 1](../TB_01/run.ipynb)) and compare the two.  \n",
-    "*HINT*: zoom in on an energy-range from $-3$ eV to $3$ eV and plot both the DFT bands and the TB bands in the same plot.  "
+    "*HINT*: Zoom in on an energy-range from $-3$ eV to $3$ eV and plot both the DFT bands and the TB bands in the same plot.  "
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@
     "eigs = band.eigh()\n",
     "ax.plot(lk, eigs)\n",
     "    \n",
-    "# You need to create the TB Hamiltonian, see e.g. example TB 1\n",
+    "# You need to create the TB Hamiltonian, see e.g. TB_01\n",
     "band.set_parent(<TB Hamiltonian>)\n",
     "eigs = band.eigh()\n",
     "ax.plot(lk, eigs, '--')"