external storage url in tidb cloud (#21058) (#21134) #21139
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Summary of Changes
Hello! Gemini here, providing a summary of this pull request. This PR is an automated cherry-pick of changes from #21134 and #21058. The primary goal is to update the documentation related to using external storage URLs, specifically for TiDB Cloud. The changes involve minor text refinements and, notably, updating internal documentation links to use absolute URLs pointing to docs.pingcap.com instead of relative paths. This PR targets the v8.1 documentation branch.
Highlights
- Link Updates: Internal documentation links, specifically those pointing to the 'Configure Amazon S3 access using a Role ARN' section, have been updated from relative paths to absolute URLs using the
https://docs.pingcap.comdomain. - Text Refinements: Minor wording adjustments have been made to descriptions of parameters like
role-arnandexternal-id, and the example description.
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- TOC-tidb-cloud.md
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- external-storage-uri.md
- Refined the description for the
role-arnparameter (line 71). - Updated the link for 'Configure Amazon S3 access using a Role ARN' from a relative path to an absolute URL (line 76).
- Refined the description for the
external-idparameter and updated its corresponding link to an absolute URL (line 79). - Made a minor wording change in the description of the Amazon S3 URI example (line 81).
- Refined the description for the
- sql-statements/sql-statement-backup.md
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- sql-statements/sql-statement-restore.md
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Code Review
This pull request updates the documentation for external storage URIs, specifically focusing on Amazon S3 parameters and examples within external-storage-uri.md. The changes made are excellent and significantly enhance the clarity, conciseness, and accuracy of the documentation.
Here's what was done well:
- Improved Phrasing: The descriptions for
role-arnandexternal-idparameters (lines 71 and 79) have been rephrased for better readability and directness. For instance, changing "specify the corresponding... using" to "provide the role's... in" and starting theexternal-iddescription with "Specifies..." are both strong improvements. - Conciseness: The description of the S3 URI example (line 81) has been made more concise and to the point.
- Link Robustness: The update of relative documentation links to absolute
https://docs.pingcap.comURLs (lines 76 and 79) is a great practice, ensuring link stability and correctness across different rendering contexts.
These changes align well with the principles outlined in the style guide, particularly regarding:
- Clarity, simplicity, and conciseness (Style Guide lines 14, 24)
- Technical accuracy, including link correctness (Style Guide line 16)
- Use of second person ("you") where appropriate (Style Guide line 22)
- Preference for present tense (Style Guide line 23)
- Consistent use of backticks for code elements (Style Guide line 34)
Overall, these are high-quality improvements to the documentation. Well done!
Summary of Findings
- Documentation Clarity and Conciseness: The modifications to parameter descriptions and example explanations in
external-storage-uri.mdhave notably improved their clarity and conciseness, making the information easier for users to understand. - Link Accuracy and Robustness: Updating internal documentation links to absolute URLs is a positive change that enhances the reliability and maintainability of the documentation.
Merge Readiness
The changes in this pull request are well-executed and improve the documentation quality. The code (documentation) is in good shape to be merged. As per my role, I cannot approve the pull request, but I recommend it for merging based on this review.
This is an automated cherry-pick of #21134
This is an automated cherry-pick of #21058
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Append external storage url document to tidb cloud.
(only for TiDB Cloud)
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