updated 11.4.1 release notes to reviewed version by marketing team

owncloud · Sep 30, 2020 · 6315f6c · 6315f6c
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@@ -644,7 +644,7 @@ On iPadOS 13 all windows will be restored, after the app was launched.</string>
 					<string>Pro Photo Upload</string>
 					<key>Subtitle</key>
 					<string>Two new settings give the user more control over photo uploads: 
-Prefer original photo instead of edited version is picked when uploading and prefer raw photo format, if available.</string>
+Users can choose to prefer the original photo instead of an edited version and also to upload the raw photo format, if available.</string>
 					<key>Type</key>
 					<string>New</string>
 					<key>ImageName</key>
@@ -654,7 +654,7 @@ Prefer original photo instead of edited version is picked when uploading and pre
 					<key>Title</key>
 					<string>Fix: Media Upload Path</string>
 					<key>Subtitle</key>
-					<string>Upload Path for photo and video was not visible in settings for some cases.</string>
+					<string>Upload path for photo and video was not visible in settings for some cases.</string>
 					<key>Type</key>
 					<string>Fix</string>
 					<key>ImageName</key>
@@ -674,7 +674,7 @@ Prefer original photo instead of edited version is picked when uploading and pre
 					<key>Title</key>
 					<string>Fix: Markup</string>
 					<key>Subtitle</key>
-					<string>Markup mode was not enabled automatically on iOS 14.</string>
+					<string>Markup mode was not enabled automatically when using iOS 14.</string>
 					<key>Type</key>
 					<string>Fix</string>
 					<key>ImageName</key>
@@ -684,7 +684,7 @@ Prefer original photo instead of edited version is picked when uploading and pre
 					<key>Title</key>
 					<string>Fix: Shortcuts</string>
 					<key>Subtitle</key>
-					<string>Shortcuts In-App purchase could not retrieved.</string>
+					<string>The Shortcuts in-app purchase could not be retrieved.</string>
 					<key>Type</key>
 					<string>Fix</string>
 					<key>ImageName</key>
@@ -694,7 +694,7 @@ Prefer original photo instead of edited version is picked when uploading and pre
 					<key>Title</key>
 					<string>Fix: Share Sheet</string>
 					<key>Subtitle</key>
-					<string>Share Sheet on iOS 12 could not dismissed.</string>
+					<string>Share Sheet on iOS 12 could not be dismissed.</string>
 					<key>Type</key>
 					<string>Fix</string>
 					<key>ImageName</key>
@@ -704,7 +704,7 @@ Prefer original photo instead of edited version is picked when uploading and pre
 					<key>Title</key>
 					<string>Fix: Multiple Selection</string>
 					<key>Subtitle</key>
-					<string>Improved performance during multiple selection.</string>
+					<string>Improved performance when selecting multiple items.</string>
 					<key>Type</key>
 					<string>Fix</string>
 					<key>ImageName</key>
@@ -714,7 +714,7 @@ Prefer original photo instead of edited version is picked when uploading and pre
 					<key>Title</key>
 					<string>Fix: File Provider</string>
 					<key>Subtitle</key>
-					<string>Some file types was grayed out and cannot be opened.</string>
+					<string>Some file types were grayed out and could not be opened.</string>
 					<key>Type</key>
 					<string>Fix</string>
 					<key>ImageName</key>
@@ -734,7 +734,7 @@ Prefer original photo instead of edited version is picked when uploading and pre
 					<key>Title</key>
 					<string>Fix: Create Public Link</string>
 					<key>Subtitle</key>
-					<string>Creating a public link over a federated share was broken</string>
+					<string>The process of creating a public link on a federated share was broken</string>
 					<key>Type</key>
 					<string>Fix</string>
 					<key>ImageName</key>