some fixes for english translation

OBSS/OBSS-eng-v2.tex

@@ -13301,7 +13301,7 @@ \section{Cosmology}\index{Cosmology}\hypertarget{cosmologia}{}\label{cosmologia}
 
 While Atmos does not have a definable form Ljust and Calicante have manifested themselves as two tongues of flame of a single progenitor energy.
 
-\textbf{Ljust} \index{Ljust}is the representation of what light and life always carry with them. It represents the purity of the feeling of love, the protection of life, respect for the other, curiosity for the new, the desire to always improve, the strength to fight with courage and courage for the common good. It is the vital drive for change, the chaos that evolves but does not destroy.
+\textbf{Ljust} \index{Ljust}is the representation of what light and life always bring with them. It represents the purity of the feeling of love, the protection of life, respect for others, curiosity for the new, the desire to always improve, the strength to fight with courage and value for the common good. It is the vital drive for change, chaos that evolves but does not destroy.
 
 \textbf{Calicante}\index{Calicante} is the representation of darkness, hatred, anger and violence. Calicante is vengeance and cold destruction, there is no interest in any form of life rather he uses them, exploits them and only in such cases suffers their presence. He sadistically loves suffering. It is entropy that annihilates and annihilates and finds pleasure in doing so.
 
@@ -13336,7 +13336,7 @@ \section{Cosmology}\index{Cosmology}\hypertarget{cosmologia}{}\label{cosmologia}
 
 He courageously throws himself into battles, fearlessly attacks the enemy, protects the weakest, defends life but is not afraid to take the path of the most destructive revenge towards those who exploit and destroy lives for no reason. Gradh loves to "immerse" among people and live with them, like them. He doesn't feel totally at ease in the Pantheon with the other Patrons nor among ordinary people, he is Human among Patrons and Patron among Humans. Passionate and kind, he is the Patron who most cares about the fate of Yeru and its races.
 
-The tongues of divine energies were too intense, chaotic and pure for Atmos to rule over to shape further Patrons on its own. Using the raw power of the Patrons of Genesis he created more Patrons, each influenced differently by Calicante or Ljust. These Patrons turned out to be less perfect and divine than his intentions, more imperfect and "human" as they originated from the uncontrollable and pure emotions of the Patrons of Genesis. These new Patrons shape wills, found kingdoms, command the creatures who dare to ask for their favors in the shadows as if they were pawns.
+The tongues of divine energies were too intense, chaotic, and pure for Atmos to govern them to shape the further Patrons alone. Using the raw power of the Patrons of Genesis he created other Patrons, each influenced differently by Calicante or Lust These Patrons turned out to be less perfect and divine than his intentions, more imperfect and "human" as they originated from emotions, uncontrollable and pure Patrons of Genesis. These new Patrons shape wills, establish kingdoms, rule in the shadows as pawns the creatures that dare to ask for their favors.
 
 Gradh immediately perceived that the Dragons represented an element of further chaos, further suffering and war. As Patron of Yeru and its creatures he felt the Dragons as alien creatures, not original, not part of the plan of Genesis.
 
@@ -13385,7 +13385,7 @@ \subsection{Patrons}\index{Patrons}\hypertarget{patroni}{}\label{patroni}
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-All creatures, even those who don't use magic, can feel the influence of these Powers, these Patrons.
+All creatures, even those who don't use magic, can feel the influence of these powers, these Patrons.
 
 If a character, due to his way of being (playing) and behaving, has at least one Trait in common with a Patron and indeed matures and strengthens these convictions, even if he has not sworn allegiance to a Patron he could still feel the influence of the Patron and receive of gifts from him.