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public String mother;
public String father;
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Почему дети Human, а родители только String? что за странная семья?) родители тоже должны быть Human

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public void sortName() {
humanList.sort((Comparator<? super E>) new HumanCompName());
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Приведение типов не нужно. Нужно переписать компараторы с учетом того, что не всегда людей придется сравнивать и научить их сравнивать объекты типа Е


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public Iterator<E> iterator() {
return (Iterator<E>) new FamilyTreeIter(humanList);
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Тоже самое. Приведение типов ошибка. Будет работать только если использовать Human, а для Dog например приложение упадет

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public class Presenter {
private View view;

public Presenter(View view) {
this.view = view;
}
}
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И все?)) Такой презентер не создаст связи между view и моделью

int age = Integer.parseInt(scanner.nextLine());
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private static void printMenu() {
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статику убрать


public class FamilyTree<E extends TreeN<E>> implements Serializable, Iterable<E> {
private final List<E> humanList;
private Writer writer;
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Нарушение первого принципа солид

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public void add(String name, int age){
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Это что за артефакт?)

group = new FamilyTree<>();
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public void add(String name, int age){
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Очень мало данных для создания человека. Мы там намного больше полей выделяли. А вместо возраста использовали дату рождения и смерти

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public String getHumanInfo() {
StringBuilder stringBuilder = new StringBuilder();
stringBuilder.append("Список Членов семьи:\n");

// Iterator<Student> iterator = group.iterator();
// while (iterator.hasNext()){
// Student student = iterator.next();
// stringBuilder.append(student);
// stringBuilder.append("\n");
// }
for (Human human: group){
stringBuilder.append(human);
stringBuilder.append("\n");
}
return stringBuilder.toString();
}
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Скорее это работа семейного дерева, а точнее его метод toString. А здесь только вызов этого метода у дерева. Нарушение первого принципа солид

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return stringBuilder.toString();
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Не хватает методов сохранения и загрузки

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public void addHuman(String name, int age) {
service.add(name, age);
//какой-то ответ
getHumansListInfo();
}
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Нет возможности создания родственных связей, а это основная идея нашего приложения

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