Suggestions for improved clarity

[rachclark]

Summary

Fixes #.

List of changes proposed in this PR (pull-request)

• I modified text to try to improve clarity
• I had a few moments of confusion and wanted to write a comment but was frustrated by the lack of ability to comment as I was making changes, so in some cases I just made the changes regardless of whether it was really what I thought was the best change.

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Codecov Report

Merging #144 into master will not change coverage.
The diff coverage is n/a.

@@           Coverage Diff           @@
##           master     #144   +/-   ##
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  Coverage   70.59%   70.59%           
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  Files          18       18           
  Lines         806      806           
  Branches      119      119           
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  Hits          569      569           
  Misses        190      190           
  Partials       47       47

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[jdkent]

Thanks for submitting this @rachclark! I'll probably merge this work in with the suggestions I received in person from the workshop.