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great work!

newContacts.add(con);
}
insert newContacts;
}

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This is really good! I typically hate seeing the curly braces with the logic on the same line as a predicate condition. But in this case, I think it made your mode much more readable. I like it.

Another thing you could explore is the use of the null coalescing operator to assign a default value if something evaluates to null

 private void setDefaultBillingAddress(){
        for(Account account : accounts){
            account.BillingStreet = account.ShippingStreet ?? '';
            account.BillingCity = account.ShippingCity ?? '';
            account.BillingState = account.ShippingState ?? '';
            account.BillingPostalCode = account.ShippingPostalCode ?? '';
            account.BillingCountry = account.ShippingCountry ?? '';

        }
    }
    ```

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trigger MyFirstTrigger on Opportunity (before insert, after insert) {
System.debug('Hello World!');
}

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I am sure you left this behind by mistake but you never want multiple triggers on an object

for (Opportunity opp : Trigger.old) {
if (opp.AccountId != null) {
accIds.add(opp.AccountId);
}

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this is good. A different approach would be to add the ids where the Opp = closed won. So you only query for those.

}
}

Map<Id, Account> accMap = new Map<Id, Account>([SELECT Id, Industry FROM Account WHERE Id IN :accIds]);

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Here I would add a where clause and filter for Industry = Banking

for (Opportunity opp : Trigger.new) {
if (opp.Amount < 5000) {
opp.addError('Opportunity amount must be greater than 5000');
}

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good. I would check less than or equal too. My assumption since the error message says that the amount must be greater than


for (Opportunity opp : Trigger.new) {
Contact ceoCon = conIdMap.get(opp.AccountId);
if (ceoCon != null) {

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I don't think this value could ever be null.

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