Comments from Phill Jenkins

[michael-n-cooper]

https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-apa/2017Feb/0029.html

Some initial quick comments:

#. Add a note in the W3C Editor's Draft itself on how to submit comments, e.g send email to , [email protected],
#. Define all acronyms, such as "AAPI", which I assume means "Accessibility API, Application Programming interface". Why are there A-APIs and not just API's?
#. Add the end users responsibility for settings and configurations to the list, such as "...describes how technologies, content authoring, user agents and end user settings work together ...".
#. Add example of each checkpoint, such as from HTML 5.1, CSS or some web technology to which the checkpoint is referring.
#. Love the acronym of the doc - FAST.
#. Change "Authors can ..." to "Technology specification provides for ..." in the Document semantics section.
#. Merge sections on Visual Media with Audio.
#. Add "Alternative user input modalities" to User Input section, such as Sign Language video input as an alternative to text keyboard, or gesture alternative to mouse clicks, etc.