Help reword repetitive text

[dsnair]

Hello team 👋🏽 ,

Building off of the designs from #4324, we have a scenario where we feel that the underlined text under OnDemand charges is repeating in a small text area. Do you have any suggestions on how could we reword it?

Another question - we feel that the prorated quantity for the month is not very prominent in the current design. Any suggestions on how could we highlight it better?

Thanks for your input! Appreciate it! 🙏🏽

cc: @ConalCosgrove @jsheppard-twilio

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[roxanagomez]

For the rewording maybe you could try 'After 10,000 messages with Engagement Suite features, each additional message is $0.013.' and same for verifications 'After 4,400 successful verifications, each additional verification is $0.045.' I think that should be clear for your users, unless is necessary to lead with the price instead of the threshold. You can also reach out to @mma1504 to discuss this content.

About the prorated quantity for the month, our suggestion for Meter is to put the emphasis in the number that is more valuable for the user to know, in this case I assume that would be the number of successful verifications or sent messages, and the min-max value is placed close to the main number so it's easily discoverable without competing for attention.

That said, if the threshold number is equally important in your use case, you could try to to update the value label format to something like "0 of 2,000" and omit the min-max values (so is not too repetitive) something like this I also updated the labels so that the card title includes 'Engagement Suite features,' and simplified the meter label so it doesn't wrap onto two lines.

[dsnair]

Thanks for your great input Rox! I'll run this by product!