Update documentation/docs/release-notes/2.44.1.md

Co-authored-by: Steve Hoffman <[email protected]>

Author: catalinaadam

documentation/docs/release-notes/2.44.1.md

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ PMM 2.44.1 is a maintenance release that improves MongoDB monitoring reliability
 
 When you launch PMM 2, you’ll now see a notification prompting you to migrate to PMM v3, as PMM 2 is no longer actively developed.
 
-This highlights PMM v3’s enhanced security, improved stability, and overall smoother experience. It also includes a direct link to the migration documentation to help guide you through the process.
+Moving to PMM v3 provides significantly enhanced security, improved stability, and an overall smoother user experience. You will now be presented with a direct link to the migration documentation to help guide you through the process.
 
 Since the release of PMM 3 in January 2025, PMM 2 has entered its maintenance phase, receiving only Critical and High CVE fixes for six months after this new version release. For continued support and to access all future improvements, we strongly recommend upgrading to PMM 3 now.