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"Management notification" has grammar typo and can't be seen in full #34

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konklone opened this issue Sep 2, 2017 · 2 comments
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@konklone
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konklone commented Sep 2, 2017

I noticed this popup:

screen shot 2017-09-01 at 1 50 55 pm

There's grammar issues with what's visible, but what's more problematic is that I can't read all of it, and clicking it doesn't do anything. So, whatever it wanted me to be aware of, I'm not aware of. :)

I also think "Management notification" could be improved as a title, since that also doesn't contain any information.

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ifbell commented Sep 7, 2017

Based on your suggestion I modified the text as follows please tell me if it satisfies things linguistically. It also should fit better within the text box.

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konklone commented Sep 8, 2017

Thanks -- that resolves the grammar issue and, assuming you verified that it fits, should resolve the visibility issue.

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